A poem about losing the hope of a child.
Powerful, John. And the Emily Dickinson dashes work really well, especially in that wrench of a last line.
Thank you Jeffrey!
fantastic! the poem feels tense and tightly wound - with a real emotional punch
Thank you Joe.
Powerful, John. And the Emily Dickinson dashes work really well, especially in that wrench of a last line.
Thank you Jeffrey!
fantastic! the poem feels tense and tightly wound - with a real emotional punch
Thank you Joe.