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Edgerley
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Edgerley

A draft poem inspired by the Sussex countryside and a birthday

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This is the draft of a long poem, originally composed as a photo-poem to celebrate the 99th birthday of a friend’s father.

Following a week of dog and house sitting in the Sussex countryside blessed by beautiful weather, my contemplation of the local environment, merged with my admiration for the man himself.1

Edgerley

The light reaches into, along, through, the evening English oak,
sunlit bark of heavy-leafed boughs, risen above hedgerows, 
August foliage as if electro-formed, or poured from molten. 
The shy horses' furtive approach and slow swerve away, 
the hefty head dipped to munch the child's wrenched handful 
of grass tossed to hoof. Crows, jackdaws, and rooks scatter 
above the wood pigeons flapping from the stubble, grey 
tummies bloated by the remnant wheat.
								       A small deer cruises 
through the evening light, legs like stilts. It’s all alone, gone 
before a buzzard settles on a post to watch the summer field, 
spook the pigeons once again, which burst like clays in all 
directions from their business in the stubble hunting grain.
The buzzard sways, steadying, plumage an upward fan 
until its yellow feet and talons clench its place, secure 
on its sturdy, tendoned legs, dark grey and shaggy at the hips, 
tail of black and tan a kind of keel; head, breast and shoulders 
mottled with feathers the colours of dark earth and chalk. 
It spreads its wings as if to gauge the air or wind, then turns 
its beak-hook and its eye to profile, then full face. A white spot 
like another eye glares from the centre of its horny upper beak. 
In the the head's curve, in the feathery escarpment of its owl-
like cheeks, in the intensity of its focus on all that is, there’s 
a gentleness, a playfulness, a raptor’s rapport with its prey, 
unknowing human harm, regret or guilt. It wheels from its 
perch, to reveal below each great swoop of wing, its roundels 
like a warplane's insignia. 
                                              Nearby on power lines along 
another field's edge, rare summer visitors bounce gently on
the wire, and seem to smile together an ironic smile, knowing 
– these Ortolan buntings – they've escaped the over-feeding 
in the dark, the drowning in Armagnac, the secret ritual of 
eating their golden, scorched remains beneath a towel 
to enhance aroma or hide the guilty glutton from the gaze 
of those who believe the little creatures must be protected, 
come what may; and come what may, may be the buzzard, 
hard on their heels as they fly off towards the west. Yet again 
the pigeons return to pursue their waddling among the stalks 
of gold, and from that little window in the house, an old man 
observes the activities of the eventful day and busier night.
At first there was a summoning, the eastern horizon giving
birth to a giant orange orb floating above the trees, rising
like a sun, but this is the cold moon, a super moon, 
orbiting closer to the earth than usual, so bigger and brighter, 
although smoke particles from forest fires an ocean away,
swept by the jet stream, act as a photographic filter
in the upper atmosphere – to turn the moon the colour of flame. 
But it’s a blue moon too – this man, toad, woman, hare – 
a blue super moon. 
                                  Later it will lose its fiery majesty to resume 
its icy stare, stark in the stars in their black firmament, 
or cloud-softened and rainbow-edged by the weather front’s 
massive blanket of nimbostratus, sliding inexorably north east.
Beneath the hidden moon, the flowers and plants keep vigil
through the night, awakening to their work of photosynthesis
giving oxygen to light: the creeping thistle with seed heads 
a weft of spangled stars;  the butter-wrapping bitter dock, 
soother of nettle stings; chamomile, bristly oxtongue; 
bird vetch; wood cranesbill which gave a blue-grey dye, 
known as Odin’s Grace, to colour the cloaks of warriors 
and protect them in battle; Lady’s thumb that gets its name 
from the black marks on its leaves; the delicate tracery 
of enchanter’s-nightshade, the witch-flower; the field 
bindweed, creeping Jenny, known as Our Lady’s Little Glass, 
according to the Hanau brothers’ fairy tale of the wagon 
loaded with wine stuck fast in mud. Our Lady, the Virgin Mary, 
passing by, offered her help in return for a glass of wine. 
The waggoner agreed but had no glass, so Mary plucked 
a field bindweed flower which he filled, and once she’ d sipped 
the wagon was set free and the waggoner drove on. 
Nestled in the hedgerow undergrowth is cuckoo pint that has 
a dozen other names, many with sexual overtones and mostly 
now unused: dog’s cocks, willy lily, naked boys, naked girls, 
priest’s pintle (a pintle being a penis), Adam and Eve,
soldiers diddies, friar’s cowl, snakeshead, and still commonly 
used, Lords and Ladies. The thick fleshy rod that rises through 
a sheathing spathe is simply a strange attractor for pollen
hunters. The flowers themselves are unisexual unlike most 
English flora which are hermaphroditic. The male flower sits 
above the female, below the risen spathe, below a ring 
of hairs to forestall smaller flies and facilitate the transfer 
of pollen from the male anther to the stigmas of the female.
By the autumn, the protruding spathe dies away. The female 
flowers fruit in a little tower of clustered crimson berries.
Bees are the catalytic aviators in all this change. 
Their compound eyes are made up of many tiny lenses 
or ommatidia, each attached to an optic nerve to create 
high-definition images of the bee’s environment. They see UV, 
and use this gift, together with their remarkable sense of smell, 
to find and navigate the flight paths into flowers following 
each plant’s unique and secret code of polarisation – patterns 
of dots or stripes or contrasting colours on the petals, patterns 
unseen by human eyes, that act as nectar guides for bees 
into every shape of flower, funnelform or craterform, coronate 
or galeate, campanulate, labiate, papilionaceous... Navigating 
mainly by the Sun, but also by the polarisation pattern 
of the sky and by Earth’s magnetic field, in flight their wings 
can beat 230 times a second. Their sex determination system 
is haplodiploid. Females are often ‘suspersisters’, more 
closely related to their sisters than to their own offspring. 
The flowers of large bindweed are irresistible to bees, 
as are those of ragwort, which produces the most nectar, 
and knapweed, the most nectar and pollen combined. 
After producing their own nectar, the cow parsnip flowers 
develop into a drone-like mobile sculpture, and once 
dispersed, its circular array of seed pods becomes 
a filigree of stars. 

                                In English folklore, bees once were told 
of important household news. So I stand now in the stubble 
field to tell the unseen swarm huddled in your son’s new 
hive about your ninety-ninth birthday party, and how I believe 
as full of life as the world around you that you love,
you’ll reach a century and the unwanted letter from a king.

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I recently reposted the complete original photo-poem here:

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